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[dredpiratebunny]

today i dream of your ocean
of places i've never been
and salt water taffy to quench my thirst
i see miles of waves
and choose to ride them
stretch my fingers through the currents
of words on your lips

youve made no promises
and i like it that way
i like to take your tarnish and
shine everything myself
and say to you:
look!
look what i have done
look at what you didnt know you had

and your eyes
stay blank anyway

Comments

[bunnygoth.livejournal.com]

I love your poetry, bunny. This one really tugs at me for some reason.

[dredpiratebunny.livejournal.com]

thank you. (:3

[hatefulblizzard.livejournal.com]

This one seems especially sad to me.

[dredpiratebunny.livejournal.com]

yeah, kinda

[diet-james.livejournal.com]

Wow.. I especially like the 2nd segment. Very moving.

[dredpiratebunny.livejournal.com]

thank you.
(:3