dredpiratebunny: (eternal love)
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her arm lingers over her head
a final pose, the shell of meat open to the world
she has burned from within
being contained was never her best trick

still she dreams of sin and greed
still she sings words to heaven

the fuel of her insides has ended
she inhales and helps the heat
the smoldering that used to be, the ash of what is to come
her eyes still cold and blue

she is folded, curved-in bone and burn
sparks from her mouth leading the way to salvation
edging the dried out words she licks from her chapped lips
the molecules of her meat released and scorched into the earth

she wants to get back
she wants water again
there is no moisture here

Date: 2007-11-16 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sireneb.livejournal.com
Just wanted to say this is good. There is lots of emotion. As I was reading this I could feel her agony and desire her want. Very well done.

Date: 2007-11-16 05:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dredpiratebunny.livejournal.com
thanks sweetie!
sometimes i feel i just write the same poem every time.
nice to know other people get an impact from it.
(:3

OT

Date: 2007-11-16 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thevirtualjim.livejournal.com
hey cheeky bunny, long time no talk. Keeping busy? sadly I am pretty damned busy myself. drop me a line to say hi.

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